New Car – #Haiku

photography of gray sports car

Built of oil, steel, and exploits
Yet smells like success


I wrote this while sitting in the service center, getting the ‘free’ oil change on the car I got last July.  The first Tuesday of the month is poet’s choice of words at Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday, so I wanted to steep myself into an environment for a haiku.

Also, my photos at the shop were garbage, sooo…

Photo by Albin Berlin on

17 thoughts on “New Car – #Haiku

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