“Now, which of you men have been filching from our caravan?” He put the tip of his scimitar beneath my chin. “I’m not having it.”
I grimaced. Someone had to take charge, fight this maniac if we wanted to live. Al-Rashid approached quietly with a heavy stick, so I distracted with, “Can you prove it wasn’t you?”
“Yes. I’ve got the sword.”
Al-Rashid knocked the man on the back of the head, knocking him unconscious. I picked up his sword and finished the job.
I revealed a bag of coins. “I’ll share what I stole, since he’s dead now.”
This was written for the March 26 Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge, take charge. This prompt wasn’t hard for me to come up with an idea for, but boy was it hard to come up with something that would fit in the word count! Hope you’ve enjoyed the flash.
Also – stay tuned to the Carrot Ranch on Tuesdays. You may be (pleasantly, I hope) surprised by what’s coming up this next Tuesday.
Good story. Loved the ending.
I still haven’t come up with an idea yet.
I thought this one was hard. I’d initially wanted to take a passage from my WIP, but they were all too long and I didn’t want to shorten them that much!
Whoa, he’s the thief! Good tiny story!
Tiny stories with a twist are my favorite!
nice one; that’s one way to be in charge
I thought so too! I like to imagine the dude who died was the bad guy. 🙂
I’d like to agree but am afriad I might be accused of prejudice against the bad guys!!!
Nice story.
Thank you!
You are welcome.
Excellent job of uncovering the origins of the work history section of the resume and what we know today as the background check.
Hahaha yes! Love the interpretation.
Caravan mutiny!
Aha. Great twist. A clever and murderous thief. 🙂
Haha, clever at least until he admits it!
We must work together to over come tyrants…
Well done.
Thank you! Hopefully the “good guy” in this story won’t become a bad guy later. 😉
Yeap, the sword is a heavy argument. For so long…
Yes, unfortunately… But, you know, hopefully we’ll go forward, at some point in human history.